Evaluation

Q. 4.

What have you learned from your audience feedback? 

( I plan to answer this question by creating a sort film that consist of narrative voice over, images    and clips from the music video.) 

I went to watch my music video at the screen on the green. The response from the audience was amazing and the feedback was good also.  

There was three point people constantly mentioned when i asked them "what did you think of my video?"

1. The use of the photo montage 

2. Editing wasn't smooth

3. Using a wide angle lense. 

One person said "i didn't understand the images at the interlude... it doesn't fit in the conventions of indie pop." * ( image of a person with a speech bubble above their head + quote )

Others said the Editing wasn't smooth, *( add 10 sec clip to show example  )

The last quote stated " i you used a wide angle lense camera, your music video would have been easier to watch. "

From what people have said I've learned that my music video broke the conventions of an "stereotypical" indie/ pop video.  By using the photo montage at the interlude of the song. If i were to make the music video again i would, take out the images and replace them with various shots.  Also i would the editing sharper by cutting on the beat accurately, i would put in more shots throughout the coarse of the video. This will make the video enjoyable to watch and make viewer's feel more connected. * ( add images from the indie pop genre )